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GoDario27
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Joined: 12/26/2001
From: Barberton OH USA
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RE: Please review my site - 10/10/2002 15:02:31
Youch! When I tried to get to it from behind my firewall, I got a " Forbidden" site, so I was kind of leery about what I' d find on my open connection. s;)
Just a few things I noticed...the home page (about us) is more about " you" not the company or what services it provides. I would suggest an " about us" page that tells about the company and a " bio" page that tells about you. When I read over your bio, I had the feeling that you' ve done alot of stuff and it made it sound like you have started up all these businesses but I wondered what happened to them. Are they successful?...Did you get bored with the and move onto the next?...Did they go under?...
It also felt like each sub-section was an advertisement. Are these the companies you started? If so, you may want to say that on the " about us" page...(click the links on the right for a showcase of some of the diverse products and services we provide) -- or they affiliates?
I like the look of the site and had no problem with links/speed, etc.
~Best of luck!
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Tom Perkins
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RE: Please review my site - 10/11/2002 6:23:14
Thanks this really helps !!
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Radio Guy
Posts: 251
Joined: 12/7/2001
From: Vidalia Louisiana USA
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RE: Please review my site - 10/11/2002 16:02:50
Tom,
I liked the look of your site, but I agree with some of what Barry and GoDario were saying. It would be helpful to have something to the point telling what your site can do for me. Then you can tell everyone about yourself - a good touch, but don' t be too wordy.
Something I like to see, because I guess I' m a little traditional, is for the navigation to be on the top or on the left. It can also be on the bottom, as many sites do, but I think people get used to having navigation left or top and look for it there.
And yes, can we shoot the pop-up after the second time?
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Adwis
Posts: 14
Joined: 10/13/2002
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RE: Please review my site - 10/13/2002 0:43:51
site to dark.
Green text and Black background is not match !
The Quality of the main page image is not working !
People need to see high quality image in the first page (main page).
Page counter is no longer appropriate in the website (ppl can fake it by blow the number up to 1000, just want to let ppl know that their website is so popular).
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